Writer s Block Over the Top Metaphors

      Her pants were straining, the way a man strains to stay on the edge of a cliff while staring death in the face, but It did not stop her from waddling, the way a penguin fresh from the feeding frenzy, into her dining room.            She had wanted nothing more than this moment, and in fact, she wanted it all through dinner. The wait had her salivating, just like Pavlov's dog, and this moment was her bell.  Her eyes were as wide as child's who had just seen his Christmas loot.  There it was... read more

Detective stories are stereotypically full of over-the-top metaphors: "The villain's hand stroked the cat the way his sins stroked his black soul. His voice, rough as the city's nighttime streets and twice as terrifying, barked orders to his lackeys. They scattered like parents who just realized they forgot to pick up a child from school." Write a short scene using some of your own extreme metaphors and similes. Submitted by alteredhistory View other answers "That's...

Detective stories are stereotypically full of over-the-top metaphors: "The villain's hand stroked the cat the way his sins stroked his black soul. His voice, rough as the city's nighttime streets and twice as terrifying, barked orders to his lackeys. They scattered like parents who just realized they forgot to pick up a child from school." Write a short scene using some of your own extreme metaphors and similes. Submitted by alteredhistory View other answers The girl...

Detective stories are stereotypically full of over-the-top metaphors: "The villain's hand stroked the cat the way his sins stroked his black soul. His voice, rough as the city's nighttime streets and twice as terrifying, barked orders to his lackeys. They scattered like parents who just realized they forgot to pick up a child from school." Write a short scene using some of your own extreme metaphors and similes. Submitted by alteredhistory View other answers I'm cheating...

Detective stories are stereotypically full of over-the-top metaphors: "The villain's hand stroked the cat the way his sins stroked his black soul. His voice, rough as the city's nighttime streets and twice as terrifying, barked orders to his lackeys. They scattered like parents who just realized they forgot to pick up a child from school." Write a short scene using some of your own extreme metaphors and similes. Submitted by alteredhistory View other answers Her innocence...

Detective stories are stereotypically full of over-the-top metaphors: "The villain's hand stroked the cat the way his sins stroked his black soul. His voice, rough as the city's nighttime streets and twice as terrifying, barked orders to his lackeys. They scattered like parents who just realized they forgot to pick up a child from school." Write a short scene using some of your own extreme metaphors and similes. Submitted by alteredhistory View other answers  Guilt...