This is the scene that I spent way too long on today. Well, chapter, actually. All the characters are total Mary Sues, from the smart guy with mental problems to the glowing babe who just needs to be loved to the twisted telekinetic guy. I don't care. I figure as long as they're all Mary Sues, it's okay. I posted an excerpt on my NaNoWriMo page which does a decent job introducing a lot of the characters, situation, and subplot for my MC Skiral. My NaNo Page Here's a bit leading into Chapter... read more
