Starting to get real divisions between stories I read all the way to the end and write up 9,931 characters worth of review, and stories where I write 31 characters, most of which came from the autocorrect function. Authors will have to wait. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5555401/1/Dark_Water "It's scent " "it's" means "it is". "Its" is possessive. Also, my, your opening is very much a standard mash of "look at how dark and edgy I am" cliches. Seriously, how about actually describing things... read more
