So I did a slight revision of my Pamela/Mary-Sue AGAIN. Like I said, it's pretty slight, but it might have to get bigger if I try to publish. I was concentrating so much on the self-insertion possibilities in Bella Swan that I forgot to give credit to some of the other objections to the Twilight books. Though I still don't deal with any of those other objections directly, I hope that it is now obvious that I'm only not dealing with them because I don't want to in this essay, and not because I'm not... read more
