Could some people please read this and tell me what you think? High in the palace of Kingsmart a young girl by the name of Karavere si Piren sat by a large window, a book discarded in her lap, gazing out over the city. Suddenly she turned and called to her maid, Lyea, who was sitting in a corner embroidering a cushion for her elderly mother. ‘Fetch my cloak, please Lyea,’ ‘Of course M’lady,’ Lyea replied automatically as she went to the adjoining room to fetch her mistresses blue velvet and... read more
