And here's the one I sent to kino. Her own style is a bit on the crackfic side, so I played that up. At first, there was nothing but a dark, buzzing haze. Then there were voices. "I think he's coming to." "I say there, are you all right?" "Best to give him a moment, I think." I blinked without knowing that I was blinking. I was somewhere light, and it was morning. I could smell cut grass, cotton candy and motor oil. Things were ...blurry. The last thing I remembered was— I sat straight... read more