Hey, so I wrote an incredible chapter of To Control . Well at least me and Leah (my beta bluepearlstone ) think so. This wasn't too difficult to write, other than the incredible amount of dialogue that I put in (I hate dialogue). I recommend that you read the Author's Notes before starting the story. There's some historical background there. I'm trying to make this as historically accurate as possible, but there may be a couple anachronisms of which I'm sorry for. Title : To Control Part... read more
