So...yeah...I didn't intend for that to be two posts, but the sucker's long...something like 13,000 words. That is the longest single chapter I've ever written; it's longer than a lot of the little stories I've written. That is one of the hardest things I've written. Sex is hard to write in general; you really have to put yourself there emotionally and physically to make it come out well and it can be quite frustrating at times, especially when you don't have a SO to help you work that out ;-... read more
