I'm definitely going to give Aristotle Vampire another go. Not revising the draft I have now, but removing all the vampire society stuff so there's only maybe a couple dozen vampires in the world and they're only characters if Aristotle needs to interact with them for some reason, so the entire focus is on Aristotle and Alex. This may be too narrow and plot-less, but it's worth trying. The weather report for Pennsic says rain and/or thunderstorms pretty much every day, though it's an extended... read more